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Tuesday, 25 September 2018

Cross Country

On Friday we  had cross Country we lined up  beslde The  cones Befor mr burt Klaped  the block  and I ran Then we went in the mud and  we had fun I love cross Country   and I was

happy.

1 comment:

  1. Hi bonnie this is an amazing story but you just need to add a little more to it,like how it started and how it finished for example,today we had cross country Mr Burt had started the day off with a speech,then he askded one of our students to say a preyer for the day.After the preyer Mr burt had told us to get ready and thats how our day started.And thats how you write a story.

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